My essay topic today:Thinking of the rain

zye

It's a rainy day taday ,I saw many people with wet shoes.Some of them even token off their shoes and token it in their hands,walked in the water without it. I got confused about it ,and asked why they take so much care about their shoes not their feet.Don't they think the health of themselves is much more valuable than their shoes? They worked hardly to gain a better life but they do treat themselves in such a ridiculous way~~~  It's putting the cart before the horse~~

[ 本帖最后由 zye 于 2007-8-21 16:02 编辑 ]

hero1_1985

It's a rainy day taday ,I saw many people with wet shoes.Some of them even token off their shoes and token it(them) in their hands,walked in the water without it.(them) I got confused about it ,and asked why they take so much care about their shoes not (rather than)their feet.Don't they think the health of themselves is much more valuable than their shoes? They worked hardly to gain a better life but they do treat themselves in such a ridiculous way~~~  It's putting the cart before the horse~~(赞一个)


In my observation, the reason why people took off their shoes probably lays on two aspects as follows.

1. Probability of being sick in the water is so small that the occurrence could be neglected.
2. Taking the shoes has little influence on the probability of being sick. In other words, these two cases are not relevent.

After thinking about the gains and losses they decide to take off their shoes.

[ 本帖最后由 hero1_1985 于 2007-8-21 16:42 编辑 ]

zye

ha, maybe I neglected people will easily get ill with wet clothes even wet shoes~~

FreddyMusic

It's remind me more or less a song, " Singing in the rain ".

不倒臂膀

I think that the lz is  much overreact.I do think those people can enjoy life in this way.After all, the pressure in life is hard for everyone, they can use some methods to relieve it .Have a walk withou foot , riding on the bike in the rain may be are the good ways for them.So I understand
their behavior.

perch88

原帖由 zye 于 2007-8-21 16:00 发表
It's a rainy day taday ,I saw many people with wet shoes.Some of them even token off their shoes and token it in their hands,walked in the water without it. I got confused about it ,and asked why ...

I think you could have done a better job if you pay more attention to the spellings and commas.

zye

Thanks for all the reminding~~

Words Correction:
taday--today
token--took
hardly--hard


[quote]原帖由 hero1_1985 于 2007-8-21 16:37 发表
It's a rainy day taday ,I saw many people with wet shoes.Some of them even token off their shoes and token it(them) in their hands,walked in the water without it.(them) I got confused about it ,and asked why they take so much care about their shoes not (rather than is much better than "not")their feet.Don't they think the health of themselves is much more valuable than their shoes? They worked hardly to gain a better life but they do treat themselves in such a ridiculous way~~~  It's putting the cart before the horse~~

[ 本帖最后由 zye 于 2007-8-22 11:30 编辑 ]

zye

原帖由 不倒臂膀 于 2007-8-21 19:56 发表
I think that the lz is  much overreact.I do think those people can enjoy life in this way.After all, the pressure in life is hard for everyone, they can use some methods to relieve it .Have a wal ...

Maybe that's their way to enjoy their life~~~

hero1_1985

如果这里hardly表示的是否定的意思,后面就不是转折关系了吧

zxffeng

Maybe they enjoy walking without shoes

zye

I see , It's also a spelling error~~

huahua2005

I love walking in the light rain!

zye

Sounds very Romantic~~

ggbbggb

For such a situation, I would walk with shoes on or not depending on what shoes they are.

gwcym

I don't your meaning,because there are "without it" letters!