发明一种新游戏 --- 英译中

FreddyMusic

试翻译如下短句：

What shall I say of the Great Peak? --
The ancient dukedoms are everywhere green,
Inspired and stirred by the breath of creation,
With the Twin Forces balancing day and night.
…I bare my breast toward opening clouds,
I strain my sight after birds flying home.
When shall I reach the top and hold
All mountains in a single glance?

ljelly

中译本，感觉没有大白免的有意思
你这个是
英文版《望岳》
岱宗夫如何，
齐鲁青未了。
造化钟神秀，
阴阳割昏晓。
荡胸生层云，
决眦入归鸟。
会当凌绝顶，
一览众山小。

zlxiaonan

都是牛人啊，古语还是原味的好，翻译过的没味道了

FreddyMusic

It's not translated by me, I copy it from somewhere on web.
However, It's interesting to know if it still can be recognized from translation to orignial.